MAE 124/ESYS 103 Spring 2008

Additional Guidance for Paper 1.

Paper topic:  P1_TopicsSchedule.pdf
Writing Guide:  WritingGuide.pdf
Sample Peer Evaluation:  WritingEvaluation.pdf
Sample Outline:  EXAMPLE_PAPER_OUTLINE.pdf


TA Robb Kulin's Office Hours: Wednesdays 12-12:50 pm in EBU-II Room 262.

Frequently Asked Questions

1.  Can you tell me of any good resources for scientific papers regarding the topics, such as scientific journals that are highly regarded in the field?
We'll continue to talk about this in class, but here are some starting points.

Visit the websites of:

A good way to find scientific papers is by using either Google Scholar or the ISI web of science to search by key words for refereed publications pertinent to your topic. If you are on campus or are using UCSD proxy servers, you should be able to click through to the full publications that come up in your search.
Scientific journals that come to mind:
Water Resources Research
Journal of Hydrology
Journal of Ground Water
Journal of Water Resources Planning and Management
Journal of Environmental Economics and Management
American Journal of Agricultural Economics
Water Resources Bulletin

News articles and the Aquafornia water blog (from your readings) are useful for overviews , analysis, and recent information. These sources may be credible (or not) depending on how they are written, but regardless they are likely to lead you to credible sources, as well as providing perspective. Here's one good starting point:
Los Angeles Time opinion debate Project H2O (April 7-11, 2008)

2.  How do we use turnitin.com?
See the detailed instructions.

3.  How do I create footnotes? Are endnotes acceptable?
Footnotes and endnotes are both fine. Any consistent format is OK. The Chicago Manual of Style is one standard format, and you can find a detailed discussion of its usage for term papers at this University of Wisconsin writing center site.

You may also use citation methods commonly used for scientific papers, such as in line references to author and year, with a full reference list at the end. A sample reference might be "[Smith and Jones, 2006]". In this case, you should be sure to identify specific page numbers where relevant ("[Smith and Jones, 2006, p. 291]").

4.  How should web pages be cited? What types of web pages are acceptable as sources?
If you use a web page as a source, then you should cite it, providing as much standard reference information as possible: author, title, date, location, etc. Keep in mind that web pages vary considerably in credibility. In general, the most credible information comes from peer-reviewed scholarly publications (which could include electronic journals and electronic reprints posted to web pages---if you use a journal article or other publication that happens to be posted to the web, then please cite it the same way you would cite it if you had found it in the library, with standard information such as author, title, publication year, journal name or publisher, volume number, page numbers, etc.) Researched reports (with citations) from environmental organizations are also often fairly reliable, although they may not have gone through a peer review process. Some web pages are essentially advertising brochures for a particular product, and you should probably assume that the authors are presenting a biased view of their product's features. (Much material also appears in blogs, which can be interesting and provocative, but may not have much real research or information behind them. We don't recommend blogs as primary research sources.)

5.  If I choose to support the plans for a desalination plant at San Onofre, do I need to address the second part of this topic (propose how San Diego should diversify its water resources)?
If you can argue that a desalination plant at San Onofre can meet all of San Diego water needs, then you don't need to consider other options for water resources. However, you might want to think about what would happen in the event of a desalination plant maintenance shutdown.

6.  How do I request an extension?
Please contact the TA (Robb Kulin for the 1 pm section; Ben Maurer for the 2 pm section). Note that if we grant an extension for one of the paper deadlines, that will not extend to the other deadlines.

7.  For personal reasons, I expect to miss class on April 21st, when hard copy drafts are going to be redistributed for peer evaluation. What can I do?
Please coordinate with the TA for your section. The best plan is to submit the electronic version and hard copy early, and arrange to pick up the hard copy for peer evaluation at your earliest convenience from the TA (or let us know that you'll pick it up in class on Wednesday). Alternatively, you could have a friend bring in your hard copy and collect your copy for peer evaluation.

8.  Does the outline (due on April 15th) need to include references?
Our instructions do not specify that you must include references, so we will not impose strict requirements on references. However, since this is a research paper, you cannot reasonably expect to articulate a position statement without having some facts to justify it. A good outline should include some preliminary reference information. For example, the sample outline that we discussed last week pointed out the necessity of identifying sources for all of your information.

9.  How should I format my paper?
Please use the following guidelines.
  1. Upload Word or pdf documents only to turnitin.com. (RTF may be OK as well; plain text can be a little tricky for formatting.)
  2. Include your name (First, then Last), PID, Date in upper right hand corner, single spaced.
  3. Use 1 inch margins, with 12 point font for the whole document. Use 1.5 or double spacing for the main text.
  4. Center your title at the top, but do not include a separate title page.
  5. Clearly label sections (intro, background, etc.)
  6. Include page numbers, centered at the bottom of the pages.


10.  Now that I've turned in my outline, how soon will I get feedback to let know if I'm on the right track?
We're planning to get your outlines marked and returned by Friday, April 18 (in class), and we'll give you feedback, particularly if we think you've drifted off track.

11.  I'm planning to consider the thesis "The benefits of utilizing nuclear energy in desalinization for freshwater outweigh the costs that it provides to the city of San Diego." Would focusing on nuclear energy and its benefits/costs be appropriate?
Your approach sounds fine. You may want to extend your consideration of costs and benefits beyond simple economic costs so that you consider other types of societal costs. And you'll want to make sure that your analysis is specific to San Diego water issues. How much water can be produced with what costs/risks?

12.  Is it desalinization or desalination, or are both acceptable?
Both are acceptable. See for example http://www.waterencyclopedia.com/Da-En/Desalinization.html.

13.  My position statement is at the end of an opening paragraph that is more than half a page single-spaced, which means it will be on the second page, double-spaced. I know that some professors prefer smaller, and in turn, more paragraphs for papers, and would actually subtract points if paragraphs were more than a page double-spaced.
There is no formal requirement for the length of paragraphs, but it is probably a good idea to make sure that people reading your paper can find your position statement fairly quickly, before they get to the end of the first page, for example. In addition, you also will want to avoid confusing your reader(s) by having paragraphs that are extremely long.

14.  Should the background section use subtitles to identify separate subsections for economic and environmental pros and cons, as the outline did, or should the text flow continuously?
Make your paper easy to read. That means that you probably want to put headings on major sections, but not on every paragraph. So if you develop an extensive multi-paragraph discussion on economic issues, then you might want to add a section heading. But otherwise you probably won't need a heading for every issue.

15.  The paper instructions say to write a 2000-3000 word paper of 4-6 pages, but 6 double-spaced pages is not anywhere near 2000 words. What do you really want?
We inadvertently used the wrong conversion factor for words to pages when we wrote up the instructions for this paper. We had actually intended to ask for a 4-6 page paper (which should have been 1000-1500 words). At this point (now that first drafts have been submitted) we know that some students took the 4-6 page statement seriously and have turned in shorter drafts, while others really labored to churn out 2000 words. We want this to be fair for students, and we still plan to have Paper 2 be 8-10 double-spaced pages as originally specified in the syllabus. Therefore we have adopted the following policy.

For students who write a short final draft of the first paper, there will be no penalty for having a paper that is in the 1000-2000 word range. If you do this, we'll weight the paper as specified in the syllabus: 20% for Paper 1; 30% for Paper 2.

For students who write a longer final version of the first paper (anywhere between 2000-3000 words) we will compute your final course grade two ways: (a) with the original 20%/30% weighting for the papers and (b) with a rebalanced 25%/25% weighting. For each student, the final course grade will use whichever weighting gives the highest course grade.